View Full Version : ok I went a little nuts....
Lauren
11-16-2007, 08:43 PM
But I had fun with this one... it's not finished yet so ignore the snot look she has going! I was doing it as a release and an experiment painting but I think I'm going to keep working on her!! any suggestions appreciated.
emkay
11-16-2007, 09:47 PM
I like where it's going Lauren. Not sure about the snot though....:thumbup1:
Lauren
11-16-2007, 11:09 PM
well it wasn't really meant to be snot... I just went a little overboard with green!
chardonnay
11-17-2007, 07:43 AM
I definitely like where it's heading too.
But you may want to attend to that snot. Looks like she's wiped it up her face. :tongue_smilie: It certainly has put a smile on my face though :w00t:
Lauren
11-17-2007, 02:36 PM
oh man I was so excited about this painting yesterday but went out to look at it today.. and arghhh hideous!
I so need inspiration.... :scared:
emkay
11-17-2007, 03:31 PM
no - it's interesting Lauren. You should so continue it!
chardonnay
11-17-2007, 03:55 PM
It's fine.
(besides the snot thing.... buuuttt... maybe you should leave it there, it is certainly interesting, and honest and evokes discussion :w00t: )
Maybe if you soften up the tears so they look a little (well a lot) more delicate and wipe her nose this could have potential.
At the moment you can't help but focus on the fact that she needs to wipe her nose.
Jewels
11-17-2007, 08:19 PM
Lauren, its not hidious at all , if you hadnt have mentioned snot, I would not have realized that is what its supposed to be, maybe if you toned it down a bit ,I dont think anyone would even think about snot , but leave it there if thats the effect you want, keep going with it, I like it
Bob Abrahams
11-17-2007, 09:26 PM
But I had fun with this one... it's not finished yet so ignore the snot look ..... any suggestions appreciated.
Snot too bad at all :sneaky2:
Lauren
11-18-2007, 09:00 AM
hahahahaha
I'm am going to take the idea and re-do it.
Shell
11-18-2007, 12:00 PM
maybe get some of that green going on in the other areas of the face mixed in with the blue in the background for shading? It has the right mood of sadness -- hope the next painting is of someone laughing! :)
ingridr
11-18-2007, 06:25 PM
Hi Lauren. I think your painting shows a lot of feeling , the eyes are very expressive, and I like the colours you have used. I agree with the others about the snot though.